Head swirling
Steady as a rock
Mind reeling
Standing still
Heart thumping
Beating not
Really feeling
Then again not
The touch of a hand
In absence dwells
A heart torn apart
Whole and well
Imposing a thought
Clean slate
With no legs to walk
Run away
Heaven or hell
No way to tell
Love it
Leave it
All thoughts prevail
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April 3, 2014 at 17:39
I think we have conflicting thoughts that include all that you portrayed in your poem. It is sad when we don’t know our direction, but I feel you are on your way in the right one! I believe in you, my friend Teela! Take it easy on yourself! One step at a time, and thank you for sharing the walk with us. It is time well spent! Hugs, Robin
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April 3, 2014 at 17:42
Thank you so much. Chaos flies through my mind frequently and writing is the only sane outlet.
Thank you for believing in me.
Hugs right back!
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April 3, 2014 at 09:48
Thank you for sharing your life. . . . I am sure it encouraging others especially that they are not alone. Peace. . .
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April 3, 2014 at 12:35
Thank you Anne. You are very kind and big ole hugs to you.
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April 3, 2014 at 08:44
It is a dark and dangerous road to travel but remember God is at your left and right and he is infront and at your back. I am not religious but I do believe we have a path and we will conquor and survive. hugs. xxxxx
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April 3, 2014 at 12:32
Thank you so much for stopping by and reading and your kind words.
Hugs
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April 3, 2014 at 13:54
My pleasure , do be brave. xx
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April 3, 2014 at 06:25
I had no idea you were so talented as a writer. This is really very good and powerful. Jen
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April 3, 2014 at 13:05
Thank you Jenni. That means a lot, I’ve never written this kind of thing before the last few days and I’m not sure what to call it. But your encouragement is treasured.
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April 2, 2014 at 20:33
Wow!!!! This is awesome girl!!! Love it!
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April 2, 2014 at 20:34
Thank you for the awesome comment!!!!!!
😉
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April 2, 2014 at 20:54
I concur with Tela Teela.
Great post.
Lovely and powerful.
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April 2, 2014 at 20:58
I bet you got a kick outta writin’ Tela Teela.
Thank you for reading and your encouraging words. 😉
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April 2, 2014 at 21:06
I really could not resist, but the sentiment prevails and was sincere.
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April 2, 2014 at 21:07
Thank you. I mean that. 😉
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April 2, 2014 at 19:40
Awesome writing very evocative thank you
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April 2, 2014 at 19:58
Thank you RoyBear. I appreciate the awesome comment! 🙂
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April 2, 2014 at 19:59
🙂
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April 2, 2014 at 19:40
Reblogged this on It's Always Cloudy with a Chance of Chaos Around Here and commented:
I just happened upon this beauty while I was scrolling through my blog feed!!
This is just amazing!
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April 2, 2014 at 19:39
Absolutely Beautiful!
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April 2, 2014 at 19:56
Thank you and thank you for the reblog.
I love your blog as well.Good stuff at your place 😉
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April 2, 2014 at 20:12
You’re most welcome!
Thanks so much! 🙂
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April 2, 2014 at 19:14
Yes, great imagery! Man you can write girl!! lol 😉
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April 2, 2014 at 19:22
Thank you Sunshine!! I really appreciate that. It means a lot to me, you know that right?
hugs
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April 2, 2014 at 19:26
Yes Ma’am! 😉
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April 2, 2014 at 18:53
Hi Teela! Very nice to meet you. Thanks for sharing about your life…and pain. Do you know “secretangelps911.wordpress.com” ? She has a blog yu may want to check out…
Thanks for following me.
Steve Pejay
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April 2, 2014 at 19:21
Hi Steve,
I will definitely check her out.
Thank you for stopping by and encouraging me in my cause.
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April 3, 2014 at 14:13
My pleasure, Teela! (I love your name!)
I want to promote your cause as I have Secret Angel’s. I can’t imagine the physical abuse…I do know something of the emotional abuse side.
Had an “ex” who still hates me, after some 15 years now… We both had a part in our marital problems, but never any physical stuff.
However, she certainly knows how to HATE! She has managed to turn our kids against me, and make me fully responsible for the marriage failing. After many years of complete dysfunction, I had to get out…
Anyway, you didn’t need to hear all that! “TMI” as they say.
Best of success with your work here,
Steve
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April 3, 2014 at 14:22
Thank you Steve for sharing with me. Emotional abuse has the same result as physical and is especially sad when children are involved.
I appreciate your support in my cause. I believe it’s detrimental to bring about change.
Thank you again Steve and I welcome any help from your Secret Angel’s.
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April 3, 2014 at 16:57
Yes it is…emotional abuse can be worse in some ways because many physical wounds heal…but it’s hard to tell about emotions…
We’ll talk again soon, Teela!
Steve
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April 2, 2014 at 18:12
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
THOUGHT-PROVOKING…YET HEALING IS TAKING PLACE.
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April 2, 2014 at 17:54
Love the balance and imagery in this one. Like the shift between statements.
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April 2, 2014 at 17:57
Thank you. I have no idea what I’m doing, I write what I feel. I really appreciate your support and I treasure your comment. They mean more to me than you know.
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